Not bad.
Not bad for starters. Try to get a -little- bit more animation in there, next time. Make their limbs move a bit when walking, for example.
Also you ought to give credit to the poeple who made some of the samples. ie.: ICP
Not bad.
Not bad for starters. Try to get a -little- bit more animation in there, next time. Make their limbs move a bit when walking, for example.
Also you ought to give credit to the poeple who made some of the samples. ie.: ICP
Yep
What DjChrispy said.
Hypochrites.
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Is there any reason you used the Israeli national anthem in this ..."movie"? To me this makes no sense.
Yes as a matter of fact there is a reason I used "Hatikva" in this movie.
Because i like it. If that doesn't make sense to you, TELL SOMEONE WHO CARES.
Bye
Azz
Ok.
Listen, guy. I was going to write a proper review but then I saw your response to the reviewer before me and I'd like to say something about that.
1. Not everyone that visits Newgrounds and has no movies submitted, is also non-proficient in Flash. As a matter of fact, there are Flash/Director (General Multimedia) designers here who -do- know how to make movies but choose not to go into the 'Cartoon Entertainment' branch. So don't presume, chum.
2. And there are no guns with long handles, you TV addled child. They are simply long ammo clips that stick out on the bottom.
3. For your first movie this wasn't so bad. But making submissions to Newgrounds does not -automatically- earn your the title of Artist nor does it elevate you over the rest of the Newgrounds community. You're a Flash greenhorn. Get some experience, then try to talk the talk.
Well I can understand that, but they really should have made a flash before giving one such a nasty review, after all, flashes are hard things to make, you can ask anyone here, they will agree.
For the record, this was my FIRST movie, unless there are things I should improve/change/use in my next movie, then I see no major problem with it it's self.
All I really want is to be noticed for my flashes, not for my rudeness.
Man, I had no idea the real world could deal you such tough things to deal with.
I will make flashes with as much improvements as the first Jaws movie!
you really opened my eyes to the truth.
Soo..
and this is a -good- movie or what? *looks around for the good movie*
I think that this is a good movie...
hrmm..
No. It certainly wasn't funny. At first I read everything. I was waiting for a punchline or a good joke. Then it dawned on me that the sound was pretty annoying. Then the annoyance of the sound was triumphed over by the annoyance of the clicking. At this point I started to fast-click through the scenes in hopes for a proper animation or some better jokes. When those didn't come, I simply closed the window. I didn't finish watching the movie. I have never done this before. But in this case, I had to quit. It was just too irritating. Sorry, choombs.
Ok.
Well. First off: Good animation, good 3d work and all. Maybe the filesize could have been a bit smaller. (I know. The 3d stuff takes up quite a bit)
Anyways. Now to your idea: It is not an entirely original concept, you know? Pixar made a proper 3d animation of a 'curious' desk lamp back then when nvidia was showcasing their new graphics card. then mac came and took the idea and animated their i-mac figure with the same concept.
Still. Not bad.
Hey, thanks. It took me a while to do this and I know its not that original. Actually, I was just going to make a simple animation for myself to test my modeling abilities, but then i just decided to make a short toon. Anyway, I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the review!
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